Brilliant poem, the emotions are so strong.

its not worth feeling this way over anyone. hope you feel better soon.

Great job.. very deep.. i can tell you put your heart into this and wrote what you felt.. which is awesome! great job on all three poems!!!

--emotionless19*

You seem to be serching for a divine love in a person who is very human. the despair reflected in the poem seems to be from lack of faith that your love can get in touch with his divine nature. another great poem on issues I pray you accept the grace to deal with it