Great poem. it flows well and the stanzas break it up at just the rigth points. well done

5/5

Wooohoo, that was deep, and the ending especially. My favorite part though, was the lines

'll make a cut and see how far.
how far I'll go until I'll do it again.'

That was very good.
Great work!

//Truest Lies//

Wow.. very deep and well written! it was meaniful.. very strong and creative..i liked the way you decided to end it! keep it up! awesome poem =)

--emotionless19

Sometimes when we are cut so deeply inside it seems as though a cut deep cut outside would be so much easier. Sometimes the emotional pain is so severe that death seems to be the only answer, but LIFE is the answer. By choosing self harm or death we are only admitting defeat and solving nothing.

--Sher

This poem is another example of serious issues such as the emotinal factors that teens seem to be having problems with I believe the pain is very real but I don't believe self harm solves anything. Even though sadly other people could create an enviroment more favorable for happiness that is not the case. i believe the answer is in Life through Faith hOPE and Love.. thank you for sharing. and brining up these important issues

WOW!! I can really relate to this poem... You did an amazing job...