Good, nice song, whish i could hear it wiht music...all i have is the beat in my mind.

It would be awesome if you could put this to music and let others hear it. i know id love to

Wow, you wrote this songg ?
lol, i was about to download it
wish i could hear it.
anyway keep up the great work,
i love it : )
-nikaa

Very touching. A shame how some friends turn on one in a split second.

Again I recommend removing the /'s and to check the spelling, but the emotion felt is raw. The rawness is a good thing; it allows the reader to be in your shoes. Nice job

--Sher