This is really really good. its well written flows, keeps the reader hooked, is full of feeling and emotion. all in all great peice

5/5

Amazing!!! wow... i love it! but don't give in, fight the temptation. stay strong and take care,
-xXx-

That was good. The ending was a bit strange, but not lacking.
I like that when it began it sounded like a long-lost friendship, or two lovers...but I can't decide whether it's about two people or about self-mutilation...
interesting.

//Truest Lies//

It was so good wow i really liked it
But realy, try to be strong dont let the urges over come you. Ok take care♥

This is kind of like a double meaning poem in a sense, but I am sure it was only meant to have one?