by Once an Angel Dec 28, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
cyber friendship
Torn Apart: Hey baby this poem is for you, an reply to your other poem call what do you see or something like that. Hope you like it! |
by *Charisma*
Great poem. liked your wording! Jpoet* |
I really liked this poem....Not only was it well written and flow nicely but I thought it was very sweet as well....You have a real talent...Great job...and thsnks for the comment it ment alot =) |
I really like the way you wrote this poem. How each stanza starts with "I look deep into your eyes" (except the second to last stanza). It's like it's pressing it into the readers minds. |
by Allison
I like this poem a lot. It reminds me of a friend of mine and a struggle shes going through. Keep up the good work. *5/5* |
by Dominique
Wow, that was absolutly amazing, you truly have alot of talant. and don't worry i forgive you...i never was really mad at you to begin with, anywho it's all good. as for the poem..idk i have my days when i feel like that, but not as much anymore, but if i ever need help..ill know i can rely on you..so thanks =] |