WOW! First poem I read on this site and I thought it was absolute incredible. There is so much passion in your writing. You convey such a strong sense of emotion and inspiration. Truly beautiful.

Quaffed with a sincere taste for poetry! Gorgeous lines, I only have one question for you.

"I Look deep into your eyes,
and I see you feel utter emptiness.
Give me a change to fill you up
A change to restore your happiness."

In those lines, did you mean chance? So it would have said "Give me a chance to fill you up; a chance to restore your happiness."? I was only curious, and you asked me about cutting on one of your replies to me... And the truth is, that I did before, the last time that I did it was a few days before Christmas and several months in between the time before... So it isn't particularly something that I want to do and or enjoy anymore. It rather leaves me with a sense of apathy and displeasure now as I know the pain that I am causing to my friends... I still have a few scabbish scars remaining from that last time... And by this point only wishing that they will heal quickly!

I Look deep into your eyes,
I baby I see so much light
Of a person who is still needed by this world
And shouldn't yet give up her difficult fight.

I have goosebumps so bad! This poem made me cry..I have two tears on my cheek right now and this poem wasn't even dedicated to me!! You have such a sweetheart to say all this and you know what..someone with suicide thoughts only want their vioce to be heard sometimes and by giving this person that chance to open up to you, who knows what you could have done! Wonderful right..still choked up!
Chels

Hey. that was a beautiful dedicati0n. such a t0uching and heartfelt piece. g0od j0b 0n this. beautifully written. thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk. it meant s0o much t0 me! =) may the new year bring y0u happiness, peace and l0ve f0r y0u and y0ur l0ved 0nes. keep up the great w0rk!

l0tz 0f l0ve-*x00o00x*-
d0ra

Aw baby thank you so much:'(
you have no idea how much this means to me!!
You really just brightened my day. My week even=)
take care of ur self huni...
talk soon xooxoxoxox

Wow, that was absolutly amazing, you truly have alot of talant. and don't worry i forgive you...i never was really mad at you to begin with, anywho it's all good. as for the poem..idk i have my days when i feel like that, but not as much anymore, but if i ever need help..ill know i can rely on you..so thanks =]

-dominique

I like this poem a lot. It reminds me of a friend of mine and a struggle shes going through. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

I really like the way you wrote this poem. How each stanza starts with "I look deep into your eyes" (except the second to last stanza). It's like it's pressing it into the readers minds.

Good job.

Tony

I really liked this poem....Not only was it well written and flow nicely but I thought it was very sweet as well....You have a real talent...Great job...and thsnks for the comment it ment alot =)

Great poem. liked your wording! Jpoet*