A Chance

by Carrie   Dec 28, 2005


But i wanted it to be you
my first love
or the closest Ive come to
at least this far
but no one ever gets
what they truly want
down in their soul
they wish for better
for more
i cant stand the thought
of her in your arms
of her on you lips
cant stand the thought
if its not me
please oh please
cant you change your mind
cant you open your eyes
just give it a change
give us a chance

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  • 18 years ago

    by Erica

    Wow carrie that was beautiful..it gave me goosebumps. there was so much jelousy and sadness inside that poem it was stunning...i can totaly relate...it was great..
    im sorry your having to go throug that =(
    ~cherry

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Bradshaw

    Your a great writer you definitly do not hold anything back in your writings, your in my favs. hope you could check mine out sometime

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