Outstanding flow and very dark

Yes, I agree that is very dark.
I thought the idea of black tears was a classy, dark idea, and also that they stained her face, that was especially intelligent and poetic.

Good Work!

//Truest Lies//

Great Poem...

This is a very touching poem. I would recommend however romoving the /'s to make it easier on the reader.

---Sher

AHHH A+ i havent been on here in a while so i have a lot of your poems to read up on
luv thy poem

love always
~Courtney~

That was so beautiful. Keep up the good work because you are really talented. *5/5*

Last line was powerful
sad...but beautiful
i really enjoyed it...well done
xxxxx emily

That was amazing. i love it. keep up the good work.
Emma 5/5

Great poem. it's so dark and meaningful. :)

I loved a couple of lines but this one the most "I hate how I tremble, when I must defend" probably just because I can relate to it well......it seemed a little angsty but you wrote it well....

~Retniapdoolb~

Great poem-really dark and I loved the flow of it----5/5

Wow.. Wowowow.. I love this one Noni. I'm a HUGE fan of dark poems. This one is absolutey amazingly written. If that makes sense. :]

I hate how I tremble, when I must defend
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They say my life goes on, without a single thought
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I love these two lines!
amazing piece..very expressive and well written!
your poems seem very nice..its like I'm gonna add you to my fav list =D
it was a pleasure to read this poem....I'm speechless =)

Keep it up
Yours
NemO xxxxxxxx