God what a powerful poem you are a great writer so dont stop. check out some of my poems and tell me what you think ,

*hugs* beautiful write, you have me crying. I hope this isn't true, but i can relate if it is. I love the ending, it provides great imagery.
She calls for no one
For no one would hear
I can relate to these two lines so much. I loved this poem! keep up the great work~ take care XXXXX
JL