The power of cuttiing

by Live, Laugh, Love   Dec 29, 2005


I look in the corner
And the razor is just sitting there calling my name
I can make everything better just wait and see,
I pick it up and start to cut
O my it feels so good
And yet I look at myself in disgust
These scars never seem to fade away
But yet I can never seem to quit
It just takes all of my pain away
I wish I could stop
But nothing seems to help
This pain is just so amazing
So I cut and cut

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  • Oh hun please don't cut yourself

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Amazing job, you really displayed your emotions well! The flow was good and it was deep. I really liked the lines:

    "These scars never seem to fade away
    But yet I can never seem to quit
    It just takes all of my pain away"

    ^^ That there is the truth. Wonderfully written, keep up the awesome work!
    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    YUK!!! he.ll no i really ewww!! sorry i mean i write about cutting i use to do it but i hate when people take as cutting a fun addiction kinda way. It's freaken nasty but i'm not saying you did a bad job. You did an amazing job of writing this but it's just to nasty for me to take in more and more. Gives me an idea for something but anyway keep it. keep on writing. I really wish you would stop hurting yourself if you are. we all love you in here.

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    O my it feels so good
    And yet I look at myself in disgust

    ^^I feel the same way. Cutting is so addiciting like a drug. Great work and if need to talk send me a private email I would be happy to talk to you

    Julie

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very well written, yuo captured the feelings of cutting very well.

    5/5