Very touching.. i know this a feeling that a lot of girls feel it sucks but in your poem you put out a good message that we should stop trying to change who we are.. good stuff =) very well written poem! keep it up =)

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Its really good keep up the good work
ashley

Hey
yeah i know just how you feel there girl :D
and well i guess the truth is guys who are worth i dont care about how you look

xxALLYxx

Wow,this really did touch me. It in a way,reflects as how I feel about myself. And you pushed the moral of what you wanted right through. Its a very ispiring piece for me, as you really captured how even i feel myself. well done. i love it. 5/5

I love you!! ur sweet plz..girl u need some self confidence.. u sound like a real sweet girl.

love Dean oxoxox

You are a very deep and smart girl for ur age....ur also a mad poet love this poem 5/5

love Dean oxoxoxox

Oh my gosh!! i love this so much!!!! i have been teased my whole life about not being "perfect" so your not alone!!
5/5

Your poem rocked hard!!! I

Good stuff.

Everything was up to par.

Absolutely beautiful! It's a one of a kind poem. and definately deep! perfect score! 5/5!

I love it :) keepp writeing

This was excellent.
I liked the meaning behind it, and it was very well written.

Wow, your a wonderful poet, i love it, it's deep with thought. keep writting! :)

I know how u feel, i like the poem its really deep, and true. i love it

Very good. This is my favourite out of the poems I've read of yours. Remember to always capitalize 'I' when you're writing it as a single word.

Good job.

You did a great job on this poem. The flow was great and so was the rhymes. the only thing I think you should look at is

i cant hide my face with make up
so why give a stuff

the whole "so why give a stuff" threw me off at first.

But otherwise, it is great. 5/5

black.and.blue

This is good!!! i like it and also i really like this line right here...

I can see a problem
an imperfection i cant rearrange
the problem is me
a something i cant change

beacause you can never change!!! i like that keep it up

Extraordinary. Really, I mean it. It's nice to finally read a poem that the poet themselves actually experience rather than reading some made up crap about how pathetic their life is when everyone and their grandma knows that just simply is not true. You have a real gift and I hope you never give it up. 5/5

Your poems are amazing im realy jelous lol. your wkid sara! lol ur a graet mate and your poems are even beter this one is realy deep and you can see wear your coming from luv you x0x0x0

This poem is crazy good! I can totally relate. The world needs more poets like you!

xxMissEmoxx