Comments : Pretty..............ugly

  • 17 years ago

    by iLOVEkevi

    Sweetie, nobody's perfect but this poem is soooo touching!I think that all girls can relate to this because EVERYBODY has flaws.Just hold your head up high and walk with confidence!

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a real bad self loathing poem and you felt the emotions through out the peice in that manner it was well done and the flow was good too good job Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "i wish the girl in the mirror
    staring back at me
    would just disappear
    into something i cannot see"

    ^^How I loved that.

    As I was reading this, I was thinking holy crap how many people can relate to this? I bet it's a hell of a lot.

    You've portrayed pain and despair so well in this piece..beautifully written.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Great write! This poem was amazingly well written... if I had to pick one word for it, I would pick "astonishing". 5/5 for sure! (use grammar :P)

  • 16 years ago

    by Nawa

    Very deep and heartfelt. Beauty isn't all that matters it is just the shallow people that care about beauty only. Super models are fake and no one can be like them unless they do a 100 surgeries. Great poem again with an important message.

  • 16 years ago

    by kate

    This is a great poem I have to say. I know that i've been picked on before and thought i wasn't the pretty's thing out there, but at time goes by now I don't care what people think of me, if you have the time to make fun of people then your not worth it at all to me. thats my opinion I have. =]

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.