Wow
that's like engraving pictures in to your mind in words. . .its so dark and well dark
couldnt think of another word but anyway
I shall give you with my skills of wisdom and intellegence
a 5
its great it really really is
I liked the flow and it didnt trail off somewhere else like most of the poems you normally read
very good
Em

I was going to put....
love
Em
but it didnt seem to fit propally with what you wrote
didnt suite the situation
anyway very good (again)
Em

This is a comment.

Thankyou for your time.

Well, i thoguht it was quite good. i told my sister it was a random poem, then read it to her so she could give an unbiased opinion. she wants it printed off. lol, in otehr words she liekd it. so did i.

rock on, lov ya!
Suzie

Vrry inspiring..mayeb you could also do me and favor and try and get all of your friens and aquatinancees to check out my site thnxs..
I owe you

LISSA

That was...phenominal!, i loved it, that was so...twisty=) lol- it was really great!