Hun, this was an amazing poem. word for advice though do what you want. the poem is going to be yours. who cares what others think of it. it's your words your poem. I mean some people dis on my poems or give me 1's but i don't care because hey, i'm the one who wrote i'm the one who wanted it that way. Hun, this was an amazing poem and for your boyfriend i think you expressed all you had for him and if not keep on writing about it. keep on working at it. Let him see them because he doesn't want advice on a poem he wants your words. i hope that helped. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

ps: thanks for the comment

I know how it's sometimes hard to put your love for someone else into words but i think you did a magnificent job. But sometimes all that person needs to hear is simple to really show your love. Thanks for the comment on mine by the way :) It's always appreciated.
-A

Wow... i really like how you wrote this... it flowed well and had a lot of emotion... i dont really think there is much to improve on in this poem overall you did a very nice job

sammie

U just never Cease To Amaze me, Excellent poem, another One of those Speechless poem i cant even describe it, Great Great Great Work, Just really Good, i love reading your poems, 5/5 Of course, ttyl hopefully PeAcE

Hey congratulations! You won my poetry contest with this amazing poem! When I read it knew immediately that you are the winner! It made me speechless!!!