Well usually I don't like poems of this type so much; but it is the new poem and you wanted comments, so here I am. And truthfully, the amount of discription sort of made me feel vulnerable to blades haha, I know that sounds weird. But it's like when someone loses their fingers in a movie, and you just can't help but feel their pain in your fingers... Yeah well anyway, to save me from anymore emberassment lol.. That just means that it was really well written. The ending though, calling her a 'hore' was rather a blow to me as I wasn't expecting it. I'm not sure what to think of it... Anywho, 5/5 once more - you're a talented writer no doubt!

I loved this poem!! you are an amazing poet, and this also reminds me of a girl in my French class.... except she hasnt died yet, (unfortunitaly) lol any way 5/5 on the write!!

LoTa LoVeN,,

TifFaNi