by Sarah Dec 29, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I don't think I can take life without you, |
Hey you really have a gift for writting. I especially liked this 1. I can feel what you would have felt. It brang a tear to my eye. Its really good 5/5. Keep up the good work. |
I really like this poem I can relate. Thank you for commenting on my poem |
by ...Vince...
Good and intriguing poem. Good emotional concept ( you feel it ). Keep it up! |
Hey beautiful poem, i falls together really well , |