Hey beautiful poem, i falls together really well ,
mel

Good and intriguing poem. Good emotional concept ( you feel it ). Keep it up!

I really like this poem I can relate. Thank you for commenting on my poem

Hey you really have a gift for writting. I especially liked this 1. I can feel what you would have felt. It brang a tear to my eye. Its really good 5/5. Keep up the good work.