Hey this poem is really good it has a lot of meaning to it!!!!!!! I LOVE IT

This is awesome!

I think it's really good and that you have something there. I'm not a fan of poems that ryhme but yours had me reading and not wanting to stop until I was done. Now for things you might want to take a look at:

I wonder each day
When will my request be sent?
When will it stop?
Where is the end?

Didn't you say in the start you prayed for something? Isn't that your request being sent? Other than that, I think it was really good but I'm going to rate it 4/5.

I truly deeply admire your peaceful sentiments and stand by them. A great wonderful poem, may the message of true peace and harmony reach to those who remain deprived of this great blessing and in turn keep causing agony to others.

Violence in the world is definitely becoming way too much to handle..5/5 wishing for an alternative to war as well

If I may suggest, you may want to add "to" in the line "I prayed for it stop". Great write though. This should be everyone's dream to have peace and harmony. 5/5

I like it alot! I feel the same way sometimes. This world is just full of too much hate and violence. 5/5 It was a great poem =]

- natz x0x

ANother excellent poem - you have a really good vocabulary - and use it to make the rhyming in your poems really good :)

Peace. [Sole]

Woww.. so much thought went into this and a beautiful poem came out! wonderful work! 5/5