You Draw Me So Deep Within

by Russell   Dec 29, 2005


I'll be there when you cry
I'll be there to pick you up when you fall
Your trust I will never defy
because your personality does enthrall

You draw me so deep within
and trust me with your life
Loving someone so nice and beautiful should be a sin
and even unspoken to take you as a wife

I'll be the reason to for you to heal
All the cuts and the pain
I want you to tell me how you feel
and your thoughts to me you can explain

This understanding runs deep
I can tell when you're down
I know the secrets that you keep
and I know what makes you frown

I can see through your lie
You turn around and say everything is okay
but then you break down and cry
and the true problems you convey

I'll help you move on
I'll help you see what you can be
Even when I'm gone
The results you will always see

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lucy Loves Not

    "I can tell when your down"...your should be you're. Anyway, I don't usually enjoy rhyming poems, although you portrayed your message quite clearly. I like what you had to say...it reminded me of my best friend (not including the wife part), and I think it's important that I can connect with the poems I read. Good job.

    Lucy Loves Not

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Amazing job. i really liked this poem alot knowing that she has a friend like you to tell her problems. I'm glad she does and i hope she reads this because this is an amazing piece of work. You are very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    There were a few grammatical errors but the subject of friendship is always a very nice one...good job.

    //Truest Lies//