The end of life

by nikki   Dec 30, 2003


Last night when I was dreaming
Tucked up in my bed
I had a most peculiar dream
A dream that I was dead
Well ok I was dying
I was really ill
I only had so much time left
I was ready for the kill
These thought I had around my head
Made me really see
How much it really hurt
These feelings that were killing me
I never really realised
How much thought that it took
How differently life was
When you knew it was your last look
So the message that I’m sending
To all the people that will read
Think about the pain
I suffered in my dream
It was really most peculiar
Really quite obscene
To see my life all summed up
That was the story of my dream

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  • 20 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    It's very annoying how you have commented on all of my poems in the same way you know!

  • 20 years ago

    by Lisa Reed

    Lovely poem...........the type that can make you really think........i love the title .......nice one.