Dad

Ok look my daddy is the man who has cost me the most pain so ur poem doesn't really apily to me. it's nice in that fantacy i wish it would happen to me kinda way. my dad left when i was a baby and has been in and out of my life for 16 years. as far as the whole a girls daddy is the one man she can trust that one of the people that wrote cammented wrote i think that's a bunch of crap because if that were the case for me i wouldn't be able to trust any guy. i have every right not to trust my dad and i trust all my guy friends and i have quite a few of them. ur poem is nice and well written just doesn't apily to me at all.

Like i said on another poem!

everyone lives different lives, some parents are the best people around, some are unbearable to live with. Your comments to a poem like is, all depends on the situation other people are in, they tend to leave a personal comment more than a comment on the poem.

The poem was good, im not going to give my personal view, but the poem was obviously meaningful to you.

Hayley-Ree xxx
*please comment on my poems* xx

I love ur poem...... but i disagree.....my dad walked out on me and never looked back. He said he needed space, but he's got a newborn now and don't give a shi* bout me.

Im sorry to make a bad comment but that is crap. well maybe not in ur case but in mine it is my dad is the biggest a**h*le around he alwaiz breaks my hart and alwaiz makes me cry. I H.A.R.T. J.A.M.I.E.-.L.E.E. LUV ALWAIZ KiiRii