I loved it. it's like a old school game child hood poem. i mean i guess if you really think about it it's all real. every game we all played or even the rhymes become something real. amazing job. i really liked this poem alot. keep it up. keep on writing. your very talented.

Brilliant! very unique style, refreshing. it had great flow, simple, yet powerful stanzas. the whole poem had great effect. very well done. fantastic write!

I Liked The Message In This Poem, And I Must Say It Was Cute! I Love The Way You Mixed In Common Riddles To Make a Masterpiece, It Was Creative...Unique,...And Fun To Read, I Don't Get To See Poetry Like Yours Very Often 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

I really enjoyed this poem...I'm not often a fan of poems that rhyme, but I liked the ideas you presented. Another good write.

It was...[I cannot think of the right words]...pleasently abstract, in a sense.

Lucy Loves Not

Wow, I really liked this poem, very different and unique.

I like that one..it has meaning while still being i cute poem

Juls

Very well written.. flows nicely and I like how you used nursery ryhmes... great job

I liked the different approach you gave this topic. It added to the overall effect of the piece.

keep writing
Nici

Wow! i really liked this! it was so creative and the message was really strong! it flowed extremly well and was just so true to the point! keep it up! i love your poems and you will be added onto my favorites list!

sammie