You

by xX-jess-Xx   Dec 29, 2005


Your life is dull,
your mind is dead.
You fill my soul,
with countless dread.

Wheres your heart?
Your blissful smile?
I wish you'd come out,
I've not seen you in a while.

I know since growing up,
You've had Your ups and downs.
But believe me, i have too,
yet i still hide my frown.

We used to walk the streets,
play every single day.
No one every told us,
life would end up this way.

Mum, why did you crumble?
While I still soldiered on.
I wish you'd keep your head up,
wheres your emotion gone?

Everything will get better,
wait, watch and see.
I'll be there all the way,
do anything you ask of me.

Helping you along,
was something I chose to do,
even though my soul was bruised,
and my heart battered through.

A tear runs down my face,
when I sit and reminisce.
Close my eyes and shake my head,
at the times I will miss.

We had some good times didn't we!
You can't deny that fact.
Times I'd laugh so much,
I thought my ribs would crack!

So when those bad times come,
just think about the good.
Cause I got through them somehow,
and...I kinda new I would

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  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Wow.. beautiful poem! this is a inspiring poem for pretty much going thru you are.. that we should get thru our bad times.. great message you are sending! flowed very nicely and had a great meaning keep up the great work =)!

    --emotionless19*

  • 18 years ago

    by *Amber Faith.* ©

    This is an amazing poem.
    I love all of your poems.
    Your sooooo talented.
    Never stop. I love them!

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Amazing job that's all i have to say. You wrote it from your heart and that's the best piece of poem you could ever get from someone and this is an truely amazing poem you have wroten. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    I hadn’t got a clue what you’ll write just by the title of this poem, but you had me right into it the moment I step on the meaning of it. The reminisce works to really bring out the emotions and tell a really heartfelt story.

    I like how you’ve expressed this poem, it’s written in a simplistic manner and it kinds of speaks to the reader. =)

    From a filial daughter to mother… a true piece written from the heart. But fix your spelling mistakes and it would be great! =) Thanks for sharing.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Dang thats nice really nice, great poem 5/5

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