Comments : What would you say (to my everything)

  • 18 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    I think he'd say he felt the same! Nice poem, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    I agreed with obsessedgurl that he would agree he would feel the same thing about you. If you guys have a love so strong i think he would want to marry you, i think he would want to have your kids, he would want to do anything in the world to keep you no matter what. You did an amazing job. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0hh huni. that was s0 g0od.i really enj0yed this piece. i l0ved everything ab0ut it. i liked the structure. beautiful w0rding. great j0b with this. keep up the great w0rk!

    l0tz 0f l0ve -*x00o00x*-
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Dark Princess ღ

    Ohh!! Soo amazing!! I enjoy your work a lot! sorry I havent been comenthing lost, Ive been busy. Anyway, amazing work! lovely! 5.5 Hugs~~

    D_P

  • 18 years ago

    by Lucy Loves Not

    Well the true love and admiration is apparently well expressed. I like it, good job. Hope everything works out for you and the one you feel so strongly about.

    Lucy Loves Not

  • 18 years ago

    by May

    Very nice! Thanks for the comment and yeah..it hurts..but I'll get through it...anyway (lol), thanks for the support!! And wonderful poems!

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    AWWW that is so adorable!!! I hope your man liked it!!!! You did a wonderful job

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    This is a great poem! I'd pick a favorite part but I love all of it!! Is this a song? Cause it sounds like it would be a song.

    Tiffany.xox.

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    I really liked this poem! it was full of emotion and just beautiful! keep it up!

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    Hey gurl i loveed it keep up the great work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    Beautiful poem! 5/5. If it really is true love then he loves you back. Thanks for r/c my poems 'twinkle twinkle little star' and 'new year, new love!'

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    Sorry, ^ i mean twinkle twinkle little star and a gift from love.