Firstly explain the name to me, it just doesnt seem to work into the rest of the poem unless i interpret it differently, second perhaps it would fit better into the faith/religion section, but then again its not really one that would fit there either, no perhaps leave it where it is, third umm....i like it! Lol yet another matserpiece that twists from each line to the next ever morphing the meaning and changing its context. It doesnt really make much sense untill the last stanza, infact the last stanza is the only part that makes sense to me at all, but thats just me..

--Lenny