How I Feel

by ash   Dec 30, 2005


*Hey,this won't rhyme at all,but it's how I feel,comment please!!*

Everything about you makes me love you more.I don't know what I would do without you or your love.I feel complete when I'm with you.Whenever you hold me I wish time would stand still,and I'd forever be with you.I've felt this way for so long,and feared telling you,but this New Years,I'm telling you.Don't say a word,just hold me and place your warm lips against mine,and assure me you feel the same way.I know that it's possible it won't last forever,but I pray to God that it does.I'm in love with you,and all I've said,is how I feel about you.

*Please comment!!I know it's not a real poem cuz it doesn't rhyme,but please tell me what you think!!*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Starburst Juicy

    If was far but needs more felling to be a poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Passionate

    I thin poems dont have to rhyme to be a poem, its not a rule. its all on how you feel and what it makes others feel... even if they dont feel ne thing, it matters to you and that all that should matter! loved it tho, love u too, love sarah~lynn

  • 18 years ago

    by Sasha

    I know how you feel!i love it and poem dont all have to rhyme.lol well i love your pom!

  • 18 years ago

    by Junan

    Hi ash i know how u feel..because i feel that way about some one..i told how much i loved him and it turns out he loves me just the same...i am so happy i hope your love one feels the same way u do. i made a poem about the person who i loved.... turns out love can last forever and forever is what i think. hope every thing goes well plz tell me how it goes

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