Making everything right

by Live, Laugh, Love   Dec 30, 2005


I close my eyes
And see me and you
Your smile, your eyes, even your dimples
I want to be close to you
I want to hold you in my arms
You said that we'd be together forever
There's nothing I wouldn't do for you
You are my love, my life, my future
You were the one that always made my days bright
I want to be the one who you come to in times of trouble
I want to be the one that makes everything right
I only wish you could see how much you mean to me
We've been through so much
And we seem to be falling apart
We will be together forever
I want to walk down the aisle to see your smiling face.
Baby don't give up
Because I will make everything right

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  • 18 years ago

    by XxCount bodies like sheep to the rhythm of a war drumxX

    The great thing about this poem is that I can feel everything without you having to rhyme. it just makes sense

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    Your poems are very sweet and heart felt but they lack a rhythm which would help a lot. i like where u went with this one though. good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Wow other great poem of yours. I hope everything goes right sounds like you really love them. Your poems come from the heart I love that!!!!!great work

    Julie

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice job hun know this feeling all too well keep up the good job

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    I like this poem.. It's simple, but yet has a lot of emotion and says so much. I can relate to this a lot, and I hate feeling this way for someone.. Cause it's so hard when they don't feel the same way back. 5/5.

    Tiffany.xox.

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