I like this poem.. It's simple, but yet has a lot of emotion and says so much. I can relate to this a lot, and I hate feeling this way for someone.. Cause it's so hard when they don't feel the same way back. 5/5.

Tiffany.xox.

Nice job hun know this feeling all too well keep up the good job

Wow other great poem of yours. I hope everything goes right sounds like you really love them. Your poems come from the heart I love that!!!!!great work

Julie

Your poems are very sweet and heart felt but they lack a rhythm which would help a lot. i like where u went with this one though. good job.

The great thing about this poem is that I can feel everything without you having to rhyme. it just makes sense