Very good peice

Aww. very touching poem.. showed your true feelings awesome. you expressed a lot of emotion about how you felt great work well written keep it up!..

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I liked it, you could really feel the pain in the poem. Great work 5/5

Thanks for entering my competition i said i would comment on the poem everyone entered so here is. . .
the emotions in this poem are realy strong which makes it very effective it was sad but i liked it well done.