Ur poem is really good, i feel the pain that u talk of,, keep it up! |
by DevilWithin
I like this alot very nice, I can see the sorrow she has felt. xox Rachel |
by Tiffani
AwEsOmE aWeSoMe AWESOME POEM!!! i swear if i didnt know better this was about a girl in my grade named Aly, wow we seem a lot alike. |
Hey Claire!! |
Yeah everyone can see the sorrow she felt but she didnt care how much she screwed my life up and she's done this before many times to many of my friends. so i thought its my right to let ppl now how wacked out she is |
by .x.PorteR.x.
Hey my beautiful, it's Porter :) |
by .x.PorteR.x.
I'm back Claire, to actually comment on the poem this time, because that seemed to slip my mind before... |
by aimee
That was really strong ur very talented and i wish i was half the writer u r, stay strong |
by Angie
Really strong poem and very well written! I really loved the last stanza! It was amazing! The only part which i found didn't quite work so well is: |