The Power of a Prayer

by SoRrOwFuL Claire   Dec 30, 2005


This story is a true one
As honest as one can be
If only you could have seen
The thing that I have seen

Liz like this guy for years
But then he liked her friend
The friend then went out with him
Her heart could never mend

She is a strong Christian
But was so hurt by this
She prayed to god eventually
And simply asked him this:

"I'm sick of the everything and love
I don't want to feel this way
I trust in you and love you so
That things will be ok.

"I don't want more heartbreak
I don't want any more pain
All I want is my other half
And forever we shall remain"

She looked around the church that day
The day she felt the worst
She wanted just to disappear
She felt she was to burst

She then looked down the long pew
And there she caught his eye
She thought "wow! New boy right here
Jeez! He's a cute guy!"

Through the weeks they came closer
And she was so confused
She didn't know if he liked her
And didn't want her heart to lose

But all her friends told her so
That he was so into her
And if she didn't realise this
Her vision must be blurred

Very soon they were so close
And they decided to become more than friends
They love each other very much
But this is not where it ends

She found out that he himself
Was also heartbroken to
He has asked god for the same thing
And he knew what to do

She has inspired me greatly
After her heart was teared
She showed what god can do
And the power of a prayer

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffani

    OMG this poem is beautiful. i can simpathize 200% with your friend too. it just goes to show, God really is everyones answeres. 5/5

    Much love,
    take care,
    tiffani

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    Hey claire this was really good I loved every line.i'm not a believer but that was really good work.xoxo Rachel

  • 18 years ago

    by .:*Nicole*:.

    Wow. I really admire this poem. It's just too great for words.

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Omg this is amazing gurl
    yea liz rocks aye! hehehe and this guy sounds soo nice and so perfect for her.
    i really like ur work (all the last 3 poems) and i honestly cannot find anythng wrong wif them or anything that could b changed or improved on. u have really outdone urself claire and im so proud of you. like i am honestly so proud of u this is absaloutly f'in fantastic. i'll completement u more 2nyt:P cya at the party
    amy