My Dying

by Cody   Dec 30, 2005


I see myself dying
And I shed not a tear
I see us dying
And I feel my fear

I see the end coming
And I know there's nothing I can do
I always knew better
than to chase after you

I see us falling apart
And it tears out my heart
I see us moving away
All I want you to do is stay

I feel my soul torn
....by your undying scorn

....and now I see the dark closing in
I feel myself torn apart from within

Why do you leave?
No matter how much I plead

But now you are gone
We will not be together any more
I know you are gone
and you leave me lying
....Dying on the floor

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  • 18 years ago

    by AnJolina

    I like this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ~*~ not loved ~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    BRILLIANT! 5/5, and I'm putting you on my faves! :)
    PV
    P.S. I like to see the opposite of a stereotype! Oh! And welcome to the FISH BOWL CLUB! :D See ya!

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Codyyyyyyy =)

    Lol I must say well done. This is a wonderful way to start off your poetry identity on here, how ever, the change in stlyes is a bit distracting,

    What I mean is you go from a normal stanza to :

    I feel my soul torn
    ....by your undying scorn

    ....and now I see the dark closing in
    I feel myself torn apart from within

    Wonderful lines, but they done fit... style wise with the rest of the poem. however in context the work beautifully.

    I really enjoy you work and I hope to read more =) keep it up

    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by Erika

    I don't really know you, but i came across some of your poems by accident, there's this guy I really like, and his name is Cody too... Well anyways, I read a few of your poems and really liked em, so now ur on my favorites, KEEP IT UP! Nice poems...

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Great poem that was really expressive and the flow was successful. Keep writing..and i must say your comment, although had me in shock, was so true. Take care of urself
    xxx

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