Good write. A bit short for me personally but i think if you had to extend it, it would be a kick ass poem. Anyways thats just my opinion. Thanks for the comments! Greatly appreciated!

Omg that's me right there. Thanks for commenting my poem "a new love" i really appreciate it!

Wow great job it is really good keep up the good work and thank you for looking at y poems
Leona

Yeesh - thats was fnatastic - I loved it 5/5=) well done

Lol! Shortness, but this time I was prepared, because it is your writing style, it is what you are good at. So why would I try to change it?

The only thing I can say really is that a little line spacing could make the poem look nicer and neater, also making it easier to read, some people open a poem and it is all close together and messy and they just leave, without reading the poem (I know I do that sometimes).

Great poem, 5/5