Suggestions for a title needed!!!

by LisaMarie   Dec 30, 2005


Smiles are no more,
gone is the sun,
Black clouds linger in the once golden sky.

Jokes are but a distant memory,
laughter now silent.
The eyes that once gazed at me now look through me.

What we once had is now slipping into the abyss.
You are here, yet gone from me, your mind tormented.
I long to numb the pain, to console and mend your broken spirit

but can\'t.

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  • 18 years ago

    by NissY

    A beautiful piece...
    Hmmmm, a Title...

    Here, but not here...
    or
    Close, Yet far away...

    lolz, that is the best I can do, but I love the way you constructed your poem.