Comments : The Proposal (Prequel to "The Video")

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    WOW....that's what I call a great poem. Your poetry is always so sweet and unique. Well done my friend...you're truly amazing! Keep it up and can't wait to read the next one. Many hugs and thanks for your support.

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl. that was really go0d. i enj0yed reading it. a heartfelt piece. very well written. great j0b. h0pe u had a w0nderful xmas and all the best f0r the new year! =)

    l0tz 0f l0ve -*x00o00x*-
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Wow this is awesome hun, you are so talented, and i love the way how you make your poetry into sequels and kind of like a big story book, if you know what i mean hehe, well done my dear, keep on writing, xxoo

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Great poem ma. This is awesome. I love the story behind it... You are very talented. Very unique and heartfelt. Took me right to the scene. Like everyone else, I cant wait for the next one.....Take care.

    Love,

    ::MELI::

    !%*~Chimica Borinquena~*%!

  • 18 years ago

    by Heidi

    Hey ;D thanks for the comments again ;P... you are one of the best commenters :P... and you are such an amazing poet... your poems shine, and you can't help but want to read more and more! amazing job! 5/5

    heidi

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Awww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    this is so adorable!! i love it!!
    >torn -x.x.x-

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Wow... the rhyming pattern is flawless, and the whole poem flowed really well. I enjoyed reading this... you're very talented at writing poems, so keep up the great work! =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    I wonder if this happened for real. This is so sweetly beautiful I'm about to cry.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristian

    Awww wow! =) congratulations