Fortunate

by CinnamonTwirl   Dec 30, 2005


They musn't see what I see in him
And frankly I'm glad
Because if they did
The green of their envy would match an infinite amount of american currency
And even that wouldnt be enough to appraise what I feel
Because priceless doesn't scratch the surface...

...but he managed to scratch the surface
and tough through the rocks and mud to reach that core known as my heart
and for that, I thank him

They musn't have what I have
Because if they did, they'd treasure its worth
and guard it with their life
They'd be fortunate
Like Me

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This poem is about my new boyfriend Mo, i tried to not be so obnoxiously lovey (im startin to hate that shit) but still get the point acros...im still kinda iffy on the title...and uh yea, i really found a good one in this boy. hasta, and happy new year yall

-Katrina-

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    Hi Katrina, you had me guessing what this is poem is trying to say! The first stanza doesn't sound like a love poem at all and you had me frowning until the end when I finally realized.. Lol. A worthy read I must say. An expression of love in a very unique way. I like that. Very creative. Thanks for sharing! =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Nice job writing this! you did a wonderful job getting your feelings across and i think that this poem definelty deserves a 5/5... keep it up!

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    I really like this poem. I think it's beautiful. In order to write a good free verse poem it has to someone flow well without depending on rhyme, and you did just that with this poem. Excellent job!

    Tiffany.xox.

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