Those commas are ment to change the line, this is my first poem so I didn't know exactly how it would appear

Konsta--that was......extremely dark. Not just SAD.......you pushed it to a whole different level, which is always good with poetry to give it your all and hit the reader hard, but wow. You totally caught me off guard.

I just read your situation in the club. I really am finding myself at a loss for words, but after reading this....it really hurt me to see someone hurting so much. And I know pain, too. But I've never lost anyone who meant so much to me, as your gf probably still does to you.

Oh God I'm so sorry, but Please, DONT ever do anything rash. Other people love you, and would you REALLY want to put everyone else through what you're going through?? You're not even alone. If anything, I'll be your friend. I want to help so badly, even if I can't really do anything...if that makes any sense.

I'm so sorry and I feel for you.

xxx

Sierra

Thank you kind words, Im drunk when Im writing this but dont fear, I am not going to hurt myself. In fact, I have never even thought of cutting or anything. If I feel bad, I destroy my rooms wall, or something like that. It wont help much but dont fear, i promise I wont.

Great poem, it has a good structure and some strong emotion! I'm glad your not planning to do anything, be strong because there are people out there who care (including me and Sierra). Keep writing and try it sober because if you can write this well drunk you can write brilliantly with some great talent.
--Broken.

Konsta i really like it even if u r drunk its good u dont really wanna hurt ur self bad and i know wht its like to fight the urge to cut please be safe cuz u have people here that care and im here if u ever need to talk keep writing and getting drunk ur poems r great much love ~beckey~

Thank you Beckey, I read a couple of your poems and think theyre great too. I wrote another poem, I think its a bit worse but I still joined my clubs competition with it, check it out.

Hey hun that was really deep and I loved it alot. you write really well. keep in touch. Rachel