Comments : Crumbling World

  • 18 years ago

    by Jerrys¤baby¤girl

    Great poem i knowthat sometimes i feel like that..
    Love Always Tiffany Heather

  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    There's nothing wrong wit cha honey =)

    It's a great poem, you must keep up the good work... well, 'cause I tell you so :p

    love,
    ~*TasH*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Oh oh...I know what is wrong, you haven't been talking to me lately...LOL j/k

    well I loved the poem, and I'll talk to you very soon.

    till then hugs and kisses,
    ~Joe~

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Brilliant poem. you wrote it very well.

    hope everythings ok soon

  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Very wonderfully written poem.. it was short and sweet and by that i mean sad.. in so little words you can really show your true feelings.. very powerful words you can express your feelings so well and its your feelings that can write beautiful poems like these... keep it up =) great poem..

    --emotionless19*

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Hunni there's nothing wrong with you, but there's always something wrong with the world i dunno i just hate having something always wrong going on. It sucks i think but you did an amazing job. i loved it enjoyed it. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow! that was a great poem keep up the great work.

    Emma5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    That is a very deep poem but a very wonderful poem.. Your an awesome writer and keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    Very deep and well expressed

  • 18 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    Wow, you know what you are doing dont you, I really like this.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    Great one, a lot can relate to a poem like this, esp for the fact that everyone gets confused at times.

  • 18 years ago

    by *BeAuTiFuLlY*iNaDeQuEtE*

    Hey, this is brilliant!!!! wow so beautifully written, thankyou for adding me to your favourites, it means a lot
    love XxFeEBeDeExX