by UnspokenDream Dec 31, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
All night, all day i think of you |
by ratchild666
This is really great jonny. the structure of your poems is really improving. the last line is really effective |
Very good poem, ur a great lil poet |
by ratchild666
Great poem, filled with emotions of sadness and despair. it will get better with time i promise. |