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  • 18 years ago

    by ratchild666

    Great poem, filled with emotions of sadness and despair. it will get better with time i promise.
    stef/xx

  • 18 years ago

    by fading_to_black

    Very good poem, ur a great lil poet
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by ratchild666

    This is really great jonny. the structure of your poems is really improving. the last line is really effective