Comments : HERE I SIT

  • 18 years ago

    by Kym

    Thats really touching = gave me a shiver. I just read your other pome; Always and I guess you have just lost someone = My thoughts are with you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Yes, very recently, with a bizare series of events. But he always said not to dwell on the "what if's", even in his last email, so I'll have to be strong. Thanks for commenting, it did mean a lot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I really love the simplicity and honesty in this poem-it says much more than it appears.I like the repitition of 'Here I sit', it gives it a flowing rhythmn, and the overall emotion speaks to many who've felt this way(I know I can sure relate to it).The waiting and wondering, the love and the loss, all captured so well.The ending again repeating the title, is a very powerful and perfect way to finish it up.Great piece.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Thank you Gary. Sometimes saying a little, says a lot.