this is a real good poem !

ur poem is really good its like the quote " one day u'll come up to me and ask me what is more important u or my life and i said my life and u'll just walk away not knowing u are my life" its kinda shows more to it keep up the great writing. And thankx for commenting on my poem.

victoria how dare u come onto sombody else's poem dising them, saying there sh*t when you cant even write a poem yaself!!!!! half the poems i've read of yours aren't ya own so shut ya f*king mouth dising catie coz i think her poems are brill at least she can write her own!!!!!!!!!!!! got any probels about what i said leave a message and ill egnore you ok!
catie dont listen to her i think ya poems are great and so does all the other ppl that have commented

right 4 ur info im the hotties homey in my school you bitc* so dont be trying to comment on my peoms
and so what if i talk shi* if you dont like it then go to hell and lock the door behind you bitc* dont be hating because my poems are hot and ur shi* is not you should get a life insead of trying to make poems because you suck i mean poem writing isent 4 everyone and it 4 sure as hel* aint 4 u becasue you just straight up suck at writing poems god you poems are trash your writing it crap just give it upm before your poor poema wroting closes down the site

hi, I really like your poem
it's very good.. keep up the good work.. Please check out my poems and comment and rate. it would mean a lot to me =)

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have a nice day from emilya

Great poem, Catie.