Lost Love

by Emma   Dec 31, 2005


My one love
We finally did meet
To bad it only lasted for a day

That was a day
A day theat my sorrow ended
and I was finally whole

You came to me like a dream
Kissed my lips
made every wish come true

That day
you were mine to hold
and you were so warm

But that night came
And you weren't the same
You told me it was just a day

You said it wasn't really you
You weren't thinking straight
You made me fall and break

You were in my dreams
Then you became my nightmare
Because you my one true love, who killed me

when my dream came true
and i had some one to love
He broke my heart and there is just simply nothing left.

Devoted To Chris

not really much of a poem it just more along the lines of feelings.

please read and comment
thax
Emma

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Beautiful, emotional, just excellent! this was a great poem.. a few little typos and stuff but they were already pointed out! nice work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by A Heart Losing Hope

    One minor editing thing =) line 5 theat = that?

    =) i like it, im not much for the whole formal poerty stuff anyhows =)

  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    This is sad but good

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Wow that was full of emotion.. It sounded like it really came from your heart.. Great write sweetie.. Keep up the great work...

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Hey, i loved it. it was excellent. 5/5.
    "You were in my dreams
    Then you became my nightmare"
    so true, sometimes i feel like this. anyways, great job.

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