That was beautiful! you did a really nice job just writing down your feelings like that... sometimes ya just need to get it out... anyways great write 5/5 nice job and keep it up!

sammie

Wow.. this has such meaning to it and im sure it means a lot to you.. i am sure you put your whole heart into it and wrote down exactly how you felt =) amazing job keep it up =)

--emotionless19*

Its good, the best poems i think are the ones that come from ur feelings. great work

Juls

I think long lines of feelings make the bext poems quite honestly, there is no real hard thought put into it just pure emotion. Its phanominal and also so very sad. I am so sorry that this has happened to you. This is why i no longer have faith in guys, not the way i used to. Be careful and dont let one guy get you down even if thats the one guy who you truly love. No guy is ever worth your life.

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

It was so beautiful your such a good writer.

Feelings are poems.. it great sorry you been hurt so bad. i can feel how much throught your words. he'll regret it one day..

I like this...its kinda different from the other ones...and it has a nice rhyme and style to it...i think its great...keep up the great job and i look forword to to reading more of your poems 5/5

I like this...its kinda different from the other ones...and it has a nice rhyme and style to it...i think its great...keep up the great job and i look forword to to reading more of your poems 5/5

Hey, i loved it. it was excellent. 5/5.
"You were in my dreams
Then you became my nightmare"
so true, sometimes i feel like this. anyways, great job.

Wow that was full of emotion.. It sounded like it really came from your heart.. Great write sweetie.. Keep up the great work...

This is sad but good

One minor editing thing =) line 5 theat = that?

=) i like it, im not much for the whole formal poerty stuff anyhows =)

Beautiful, emotional, just excellent! this was a great poem.. a few little typos and stuff but they were already pointed out! nice work! 5/5