ThE uNkNoWn GiRL tHaT DiEd (true story)

by 4EvErHeRs   Dec 31, 2005


A girl so lonely
A girl so insecure
Hid in a corner
Year after year

No one liked her
She didnt fit in
Some days they pulled her hair
Others she went face first in a trash bin

She had glasses and braces
But she wasnt very bright
The boys and girls her age laugh
Because she cant talk right

This girl spoke very slowly
Because she was dropped on her head
When she was only 6 months old
Her mommy was dead

She died of cancer
It was a painful death
Because she loved her daughter
Until her very last breath

Now she stays with her father
Who drinks his pain away
He comes home to hit her
Leaving marks on her each day

Shes kneels down in her room
And gives one last prayer to god
Tells him that he was never there
And that hes one big fraud

Staring at the ceiling
Tears lie in her eyes
Pulls out her blade
Slits her throat and calmly dies

Her daddy kept on drinking
The kids pick on someone new
So in the end
Maybe she can die too

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  • 14 years ago

    by haunted

    I cried:'(
    awesome job!
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by best hello hardest goodbye

    A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!.!. =]]]]]]]]]]]]

  • 17 years ago

    by haunted

    True story?
    Wow.
    I feel sorry for her, but she wanted to die.
    So that was her choice.
    I really enjoyed this poem even though it showed a lot of pain, and grief, but it actually made sense why she slit her throat.
    I felt that I understood because usually when I hear people committing suicide, I just think they're stupid.
    But you showed me one of the reasons why they commit suicide!!
    Thanks!!!
    Totally love your poem!!! :)
    ~Qistina~

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This is a true story? Heartbreaking what kids do to one another....

    Mallori