Depression

by Liquid Dreams   Dec 31, 2005


Clenched fists
Tear-stained eyes
Scarred wrists
Muffled cries

Hurt and afraid
All alone
The mistakes made
Were unknown

Innocence sold
Lost anew
Heart of gold
Turned black and blue

Promises broken
Memories fade
Shattered token
Shining blade

Piercing skin
Let it bleed
Pain within
Torn indeed

Whispered sorrows
Endless cries
No tomorrow
Say goodbye

One last time
Lift the knife
Such a crime
Taking a life

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  • 18 years ago

    by C h r i s s i e___X

    Amazing

  • 18 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Good poem. exelent work. well written :) good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Dohr

    A very impactful poem in so few words... I too am from Illinois and was wondering what city you reside in. I, myself, live in Glenview, a suburb of Chicago. Any response would be appreciated: )

  • 18 years ago

    by IfIhide11

    It was amazing. I loved how deep it was. Nice job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Whats the cool pattern? -No offense but the rhyme scheme is one of the simplest-(i mean i use it but) its not that great. i like it very much but the 'cool pattern' isnt very cool.

    i did njoy how vivid and full of emotion it was. and how it told a very sad story

    Keep it up

    =]

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