HOLY CRAP DUDE...that was pretty good...actually really good...cant think of a single thign that was bad about it...great work!

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This is a Great poem!
It really works out nicely
Well done!

Aurelie~

Wow!! That was awsome!! I really really REALLY enjoyed read it! I liked how you made the lines short. The flow was very good!! You Did an amazing job! Keep it up!!

Cayce x

Great job, I liked this one b/c it was so vivid and so sad. Great job and conggrats on getting 2nd place in the contest sweetie. Keep writing and doing a wonderful job

Wow. This is absolutely amazing. I love it. The pattern is awesome.

Omg i love it.. it does have a cool pattern. its so good. i really like how it all flowed and rhymed.. i can relate to it too. so i love it. i kno how u feel. u wrote this sooo well. keep on writing great job 5/5
take care
angie

Whats the cool pattern? -No offense but the rhyme scheme is one of the simplest-(i mean i use it but) its not that great. i like it very much but the 'cool pattern' isnt very cool.

i did njoy how vivid and full of emotion it was. and how it told a very sad story

Keep it up

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It was amazing. I loved how deep it was. Nice job.

A very impactful poem in so few words... I too am from Illinois and was wondering what city you reside in. I, myself, live in Glenview, a suburb of Chicago. Any response would be appreciated: )

Good poem. exelent work. well written :) good job

Amazing