Close your eyes, dear

by Mona   Dec 31, 2005


Can you see her standing there?
Breathing the cold air
Her black hair is dancing with the wave
She is standing there so brave

Her wrists with scars
Yet her green eyes shine like stars
Her condition unknown
Her face like a stone

She looked up at me almost as if to say
Take me away
I whispered in her ear,
Close your eyes dear, Heaven is near

Heaven's throne we will claim
Cause hell is all the same
Put these white roses in your hair
Your life in heaven will be fair

So close your eyes now dear,
Cause heaven is near
At least so it seems
In my sweetest dreams...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlin

    You might not know me but this poem is the best I have ever read. It has so much emotion and feelings to it. I loved the rhyme scheme it went well
    The format and well everything in it was awesome If any time you want to read and comment on my poems you may and if you do rate them to please

  • 18 years ago

    by CuteCleaver14

    Hey I like this one, it has good fluency and it is kinda sad, I hope that you keep writing, and keep up the good work ~Kayla~

  • 18 years ago

    by Paul

    Touching poem...It left me almost speechless...I love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    Hey great poem!!! I loved it. Thanks for commenting on my poem. Much appreiciated.

    Take Care

    ~DyingBlackRose~

  • 18 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    It gave me chills... it was so haunting. 5/5

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