Its very nice,, very moving! good work!

Hey hunn! good work once again, it is so moving, I love it! i hope you're okay ...luv ya-xxx-

Very sweet!! n sad too..but keep writing..great write.
xxx

Awww!!! *wipes tear* really really nice poem hun!! aaww i loved it, one of my favourites definately. keep up the good work!!
Rosie xXx

Wow!!
loved it!!!
wow im speachless, i loved the twist, the vocab, everything.
Keep writing hun, thank you so much for the comment.
*hugs*
xoxoxoxo

Hey, This was really great. you did an amazing job. my favourite line would be the one about putting the white roses in her hair. that image came through brilliantly.

Rock on adn keep writing : )
Suzie

Hello mona,
wow. what can i say this is the first poem of yours i've read and i already love it!! brilliant write, i could imagine the girl standing there infront of me by the way u desribed it. thanks for commenting on my poem, it meant alot to me. I put alot of emotion into it, and i'm glad you understood it. i'll try to read more of your poems later, thanks again:)
weepingxxxx

Woah your from the neatherlands, I want to move there when Im 18, thank you for your comment by the way I like this one

This is sooo sweet and sad i have tears in my eyes ur incredible

Mona...oh girl. I love this poem. this is such a sad poem. You are such an amazing writer...!! I love all your writing so keep writing...

That was gorgeous...brought tears to my eyes...keep writing you're very very talented! 5/5

So beautiful honey
all your poems really set the scene and create such amazing imagery...
very very good
I loved it
one of your best
take care
lots of love
emily
xxxxxxxxxxx

Wow, simply breathtaking! Beautiful writing, I love the rhyme scheme, perfect! Love it!

I really loved the imagery, nice work

Hiya Mona,
Yes it's like my 50 millionth time reading it! and YES it's my SECOND comment!! But i have to say, It's a truely amazing poem with such depth!! So much emotion. This is still one of my favourites hun!! I loved the line "now close your eyes dear, heaven is hear" something like that. Aww sooo amazing! well done!!
Rosie xXx

Another well-done poem. The format, and everything is awesome, but this time I felt it was lacking a little bit of imagery, most of the time I could see it all, but sometimes everything just got confusing and I had to wipe the image from my mind. I also like the rhymes you chose, they don't seem forced in the least bit.

Great job, you are an awesome writer.

Hey this is really beautiful, Very well written
Thankyou for your comment
love
XxFeEBeDeExX

WoOoW wut a sweet poem!!!! its really effective and the rhyme scheme was really nice. I loved every stanza!
Oh And my name is mentioned up in ur profile. I'm so honored, Lolz. you're one of the greatest writers here I luv ur poems esp the poem"somewhere away"its my fav of all! I'm sure all of ur poems that I hvn't read yet r totally amazing. just like this one!!!!!
than-Q so much for ur sweet comment on my poem"never again let go" things r ok ryt now THANK GOD!!!!
Keep up the good work
Much Luv
NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

Excellent. Great write, and straight from the heart. I could picture it in my mind.

5/5
Chelsey

It gave me chills... it was so haunting. 5/5

~ Tina