Hey great poem!!! I loved it. Thanks for commenting on my poem. Much appreiciated. |
by Paul
Touching poem...It left me almost speechless...I love it. |
Hey I like this one, it has good fluency and it is kinda sad, I hope that you keep writing, and keep up the good work ~Kayla~ |
by Kaitlin
You might not know me but this poem is the best I have ever read. It has so much emotion and feelings to it. I loved the rhyme scheme it went well |